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KushikushunKushikushun Posts: 1,263
edited November 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This is just too overwhelming,
sky is a heavy pink, blue and dark
Way beyond my understanding.





...not finished yet I think...just popped into my head.
Why not be mediocre and be the best at it that you can be?
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  • KushikushunKushikushun Posts: 1,263
    This is just too overwhelming,
    sky is a heavy pink, blue and dark
    Way beyond my understanding.

    One foot in front of the other,
    rely on the ground is the best I can do
    Trees don't even bother.

    ........
    Why not be mediocre and be the best at it that you can be?
  • KushikushunKushikushun Posts: 1,263
    Oh...whatever...I am never good at finishing things...
    Why not be mediocre and be the best at it that you can be?
  • you just don't understand it yet...
    hard to pin something down when you don't know what it is

    why don't the trees bother?
  • KushikushunKushikushun Posts: 1,263
    you just don't understand it yet...
    hard to pin something down when you don't know what it is

    why don't the trees bother?

    Thanks again! Its just I start things far too often which I won't finish.
    I'll give it another go...will just rewrite it on here so you can follow the process...or add some ideas of your own.

    The trees don't bother to understand the way things are.....
    Why not be mediocre and be the best at it that you can be?
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