Mi Unico Y Verdadero Amor

naturalgrlnaturalgrl Posts: 18
edited August 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
energy thrills me once more
your love for music
clearly on view
silly funky face i love
as glasses slip down your nose
strong solid older frame
with confident arms
i long to be held by again
your scent lingers
on lips and throat
and i see that dance
done with carefree command
of your axe
and your public space

but here inside
our secret castle
you perform only for me
given to magic impulse
with eagerness and submission
that's how much
you mean within
that secret known to us alone
endears you to me
draws tears

i'll never know anyone like you
maybe i will always be
in love with you anyway
i seem to have no choice

all my love, dear
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    That's a nice poem.
    I feel their is alot meaning beneath your words.
    As far as the title goes,
    I don't speak/read ancient cryptic Sanskrit/Sanscrit,
    but i'll try to unscramble this writing on the wall.

    I think it says

    Kiss my ass fucker.(or)

    My one true love.(or)

    My ass you can kiss fucker.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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