it's her job
puddle in a muddle
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their is feeling
unless it's faked
you feel lucky
that this passion
has a route
it ia allowed
to escape
you feel empowered
she is with you
you are hers
she is yours
she dreams of being a ballerina
floating across a stage
somewhere else in the world
just not here
let her mind take her
anywhere but here
it's her job
just a job that she performes
the closet
she has ever come to acting
to inspiring
no apluase from the audience
after the closing act
she looks at the camera
and you see
it was not for you
you are not special
just another prop
to be wheeled out
this is just something she does
when she dreams of dancing
when she dreams of being a balerina
unless it's faked
you feel lucky
that this passion
has a route
it ia allowed
to escape
you feel empowered
she is with you
you are hers
she is yours
she dreams of being a ballerina
floating across a stage
somewhere else in the world
just not here
let her mind take her
anywhere but here
it's her job
just a job that she performes
the closet
she has ever come to acting
to inspiring
no apluase from the audience
after the closing act
she looks at the camera
and you see
it was not for you
you are not special
just another prop
to be wheeled out
this is just something she does
when she dreams of dancing
when she dreams of being a balerina
used to be coded,
cause i got branded,
don't give two shits about labels,....
let me lay myself bare to you
oh by the way i'm off to fuckin paRIS!
cause i got branded,
don't give two shits about labels,....
let me lay myself bare to you
oh by the way i'm off to fuckin paRIS!
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there's a lot of typos/mispells, but the poem's almost perfect, in my opinion
"just not here
let her mind take her
anywhere but here
it's her job"
that part could use something, or something less, i'm not sure...
but all in all, very very nice read
thank you
i like the part
when she dreams of dancing
when she dreams of being a ballerina..:)
it's cute.