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dq4life

idk whether i like this song or not, but what the hell, here it is.btw, any feedback or title suggestions would be great.


V1
there's nothing you can do
to turn back time
nothing you could say
to make this right
look at all the damage you've done

and i know this
just won't pass
got a strange feeling this is gonna last
you're forever branded in my memory

CHORUS
you left a scar
that hasn't faded
left a mark
i can't seem to erase it
nothing i do
can keep my thoughts away
keep my thoughts away
from you

V2
i'm so distracted
am i losing my mind
wish there was some way
to leave you behind
i'm so alone

i feel so helpless
feel like such a fool
and i wish i didn't still
need you
what can i do

CHORUS
you left a scar
that hasn't faded
left a mark
i can't seem to erase it
nothing i do
can keep my thoughts away
from you

BRIDGE
i miss when life was uncomplicated
and i wish i wasn't still so damn jaded
i wish that i could smile without having to fake it
before you i was actually happy
oh how i miss those days

you left a scar
still hasn't faded
left a mark
can't seem to erase it
nothing i do
will make me
will make me get over you.

dq4life

btw, feedback on this thing would be much appreciated. (keep in mind i'm only 16, that might help.)

chadwick

its decent.
i dont know what the title can be.
you'll figure something out.
do you write alot, or no?
keep it up, it'll grow with you and stuff.

dq4life

chadwick wrote:

its decent.
i dont know what the title can be.
you'll figure something out.
do you write alot, or no?
keep it up, it'll grow with you and stuff.

every so often. i guess pretty often. i love writing songs, which is what this is, and i'd say i've written somewhere between 15 or 20 songs. this one's ok, but idk if i really like it that much.