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Tragedy

marker_in_the_sandmarker_in_the_sand Posts: 272
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm not used to write things like this... sorry if it's rubbish...

Two troubled souls unite
Form one, and then delight
One happy soul they form
Leaving two troubled ones behind

Only one thing must come between
And everything went wrong
Only another one can see
That this what we’ve done

Two troubled souls unite
Form one, and then collide…
To steal my heart…
To fall apart…
Leaving one troubled soul behind…
I don't want to be the fool that's behind me but I am...

I'll Hold The Pain... Release...

Yourself
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  • marker_in_the_sandmarker_in_the_sand Posts: 272
    whoops i guess i doubled it:p
    I don't want to be the fool that's behind me but I am...

    I'll Hold The Pain... Release...

    Yourself
  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    Its not rubbish.
    Its very nice.
    Hope to see you here again.
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • red mozziered mozzie Posts: 35
    i was umm, gonna say what Brainofdz said¡
    i liked it toos, thanks for sharin'¡

    :)
    ~i wanna rise .. and say g'nite .. i wanna take .. a look on the other side~
    rEd mozziE
  • marker_in_the_sandmarker_in_the_sand Posts: 272
    Brainofdz wrote:
    Its not rubbish.
    Its very nice.
    Hope to see you here again.

    alright... now that I'm knowing that I'll try out more...

    thank you:D
    I don't want to be the fool that's behind me but I am...

    I'll Hold The Pain... Release...

    Yourself
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    yea its nice.
    keep it up.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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