Valentines Day Poem.

macgyver06

i wrote this for my girlfriend (im not 5) thought it would be funny and sweet lemme know what you readers think so i can go through with this thing on thursday


Layed back, relaxing on an arrow aimed at you
Hearts in eyes, red to white, the colors love we learned in school
writing live with words, these thoughts, the night i met you.

Brenda, you've slowed time for me
like the world is just for us.
Brenda, your pepperoni and cheese
and I am just the crust.
Brenda, your sincereness rubs off
on everyone you meet.
Brenda, If I wrote rap poems
you'd have credit on the street.
Brenda, I stare in your eyes
shape and color same as mine.
Brenda, share your lip gloss
and be my valentine.


I love you.

dcfaithful

macgyver06 wrote:

i wrote this for my girlfriend (im not 5) thought it would be funny and sweet lemme know what you readers think so i can go through with this thing on thursday


Layed back, relaxing on an arrow aimed at you
Hearts in eyes, red to white, the colors love we learned in school
writing live with words, these thoughts, the night i met you.

Brenda, you've slowed time for me
like the world is just for us.
Brenda, your pepperoni and cheese
and I am just the crust.
Brenda, your sincereness rubs off
on everyone you meet.
Brenda, If I wrote rap poems
you'd have credit on the street.
Brenda, I stare in your eyes
shape and color same as mine.
Brenda, share your lip gloss
and be my valentine.


I love you.

dude totally go for it. i write poems and shit for my girl and the reaction is ALWAYS a good one, throw some flowers in there...a good bouquet of roses is a traditional and thoughtful idea.