Out of Area, Just Perimeter.

macgyver06macgyver06 Posts: 2,500
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Lyrics from Macgyver06

Outlasting aching love this can't be bad.
Sharing thoughts of futures, we once had.
Together we now hold each others hearts.
The two of us, in bed, light years apart.
I know this love will fill the hole it's true.
These thoughts in mind the eve that I'll meet you.
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  • macgyver06macgyver06 Posts: 2,500
    I am currently a doughnut :)
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    nice lyrics, i take it you are in a bad? is that the whole song or no?
    a feeling i get out of it is once you love someone and ya drift away from their feelings, mind, soul ect..your life-your memories of good times kick ya in the groin area for years or maybe even forever..and being a doughnut might not be so bad..id rather be a thingy..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • macgyver06macgyver06 Posts: 2,500
    it just came to me last night..apparently i dream in iambic pentameter
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i looked up your hugely grotesque words, iambic and pentameter..
    um, cool..haha..dunno why grotesque came to my mind but it did so i used it..
    no offense given..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • macgyver06macgyver06 Posts: 2,500
    Im Confused?
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    yea me too
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • macgyver06macgyver06 Posts: 2,500
    what the hell is going on..is it comfusion??
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    1,2,3..does this signature thingy work that i just applied to my thingy..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • macgyver06macgyver06 Posts: 2,500
    the NAIS lyrics? thats all i see
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