In Limbo By Su

writersu

I know the times will come to you
When you'll wish you can only phone
Or times when a distant view
Makes you feel so alone
There will be things you'll wish for me
To tell you where I stand
Perhaps one day the wind blows free and you yearn to hold my hand
Yes, there'll be times for it doesn't stand still
When you'll wish that I were near
To see to relish in your life until you can walk without me near
For rainbows call out my name
And starlight echoes my voice
My love do no seek who to blame
Know we do not hold that choice
Perhaps I'm with the Lord above
Fresh as a baby born
Rest assured I am basked in love
My spirit is never torn
For as long as you breathe and exist I will so nearly remain
Let go of all that I have missed
Life holds no place for disdain
Instead keep me inside your heart
And know I live so deep
Inside the very precious part
Where those we have loved keep.

chadwick

well i couldn't read that at a funeral without cryin a tear or 3.
so um, no wonder you were all messed up on the inside.
it was a funeral for god sakes.
and it is a piece of your heart felt emotions you were sharing with a room full
of people, some of which you probably didn't even know.
i'd have ran away and hid under my car out in the parking lot.

the wolf

chadwick wrote:

well i couldn't read that at a funeral without cryin a tear or 3.
so um, no wonder you were all messed up on the inside.
it was a funeral for god sakes.
and it is a piece of your heart felt emotions you were sharing with a room full
of people, some of which you probably didn't even know.
i'd have ran away and hid under my car out in the parking lot.

i agree. i would have shed a few myslef.


very good.

writersu

writersu wrote:

I know the times will come to you
When you'll wish you could only phone
Or times when a distant view
Makes you feel so alone
There will be things you'll wish for me
To tell you where I stand
Perhaps one day the wind blows free and you yearn to hold my hand
Yes, there'll be times for it doesn't stand still
When you'll wish that I were near
To see to relish in your life until you can walk without me near
But rainbows call out my name
And starlight echoes my voice
My love do not seek who to blame
Know we do not hold that choice
Perhaps I'm with the Lord above
Fresh as a baby born
Rest assured I am basked in love
My spirit is never torn
For as long as you breathe and exist I will so nearly remain
Let go of all that I have missed
Life holds no place for disdain
Instead hold me inside your heart
And know I live so deep
Inside the very precious part
Where those we have loved keep.

(I hate it that you can't edit your own work.............)

catefrances

writersu wrote:

(I hate it that you can't edit your own work.............)

yes.. we all do. were being punished for someone else's sins. :(

writersu

catefrances wrote:

yes.. we all do. were being punished for someone else's sins. :(

really? can you tell what happened or is that not allowed?

catefrances

writersu wrote:

really? can you tell what happened or is that not allowed?

i dont know what happened. and considering how long ive been posting on this forum and never having been able to edit, i'd say a reprieve is long overdue.

writersu

catefrances wrote:

i dont know what happened. and considering how long ive been posting on this forum and never having been able to edit, i'd say a reprieve is long overdue.

yeah, I guess some things are better left a mystery.

justam

writersu wrote:

yeah, I guess some things are better left a mystery.

I remember what happened.

There was fighting.

There were mad edits by numerous people to cover their tracks. This habit was discovered by the other people involved.

There was strife. There was drama.

catefrances

justam wrote:

I remember what happened.

There was fighting.

There were mad edits by numerous people to cover their tracks. This habit was discovered by the other people involved.

There was strife. There was drama.

and that never happens on the other forums. :rolleyes:


we need to edit our work. so how about it mods??? i think we've served our penance for the sins of others.

chadwick

it really doesn't bug me not having an edit option.
i mean sure it would be ok, and at times it pissed me off not having
an edit option to click on and correct my fuck up,
but i think i understand as to why we don't have an edit option here
in the poetry forum.

besides it makes it a challenge to spell correctly
and use correct grammatically written sentences if that's the author's intent.
however, poetry need not be grammatical correctness.

besides, as a writer in this day and age i truly feel we are very spoiled
with all the WORD programs out there these days.

i truly try and write using the old school method.
microsoft word is used last.
i actually use dictionaries and thesauruses so much
it might make your head.

catefrances

chadwick wrote:

it really doesn't bug me not having an edit option.
i mean sure it would be ok, and at times it pissed me off not having
an edit option to click on and correct my fuck up,
but i think i understand as to why we don't have an edit option here
in the poetry forum.

besides it makes it a challenge to spell correctly
and use correct grammatically written sentences if that's the author's intent.
however, poetry need not be grammatical correctness.

besides, as a writer in this day and age i truly feel we are very spoiled
with all the WORD programs out there these days.

i truly try and write using the old school method.
microsoft word is used last.
i actually use dictionaries and thesauruses so much
it might make your head.

yeah yeah yeah chad. but no matter how careful you are, sometimes something gets through.

i want to be able to edit

chadwick

catefrances wrote:

yeah yeah yeah chad. but no matter how careful you are, sometimes something gets through.

i want to be able to edit

oh believe me i know cate.
truly i know, i really, really know..

ssshhh ... cate-ster ... ssshhhhh,
move away from the edit option button clickin fuckin thingy
you do not need it, you do not want it..
you own the fucking language cate...

cate, use the force
let it guide your keyboard..

tell the edit option button to go suck on a big one someplace

writersu

chadwick wrote:

oh believe me i know cate.
truly i know, i really, really know..

ssshhh ... cate-ster ... ssshhhhh,
move away from the edit option button clickin fuckin thingy
you do not need it, you do not want it..
you own the fucking language cate...

cate, use the force
let it guide your keyboard..

tell the edit option button to go suck on a big one someplace

do I sense a Dewey Cox spin off?

catefrances

chadwick wrote:

oh believe me i know cate.
truly i know, i really, really know..

ssshhh ... cate-ster ... ssshhhhh,
move away from the edit option button clickin fuckin thingy
you do not need it, you do not want it..
you own the fucking language cate...

cate, use the force
let it guide your keyboard..

tell the edit option button to go suck on a big one someplace

oh please :rolleyes: i make plenty of mistakes in my writing. i know theyre trivial for the most part ... it just pisses me off when i see that one has gotten past me.

writersu

catefrances wrote:

oh please :rolleyes: i make plenty of mistakes in my writing. i know theyre trivial for the most part ... it just pisses me off when i see that one has gotten past me.

me too...............

chadwick

catefrances wrote:

oh please :rolleyes: i make plenty of mistakes in my writing. i know theyre trivial for the most part ... it just pisses me off when i see that one has gotten past me.

hey cate
we all make those same mistakes..

it pisses us off, the writer who fucks up..
but guess what???

fuck em

we are our worst critics anyhow..
and it really sucks to fuck up grammatically in public..

catefrances

chadwick wrote:

hey cate
we all make those same mistakes..

it pisses us off, the writer who fucks up..
but guess what???

fuck em

we are our worst critics anyhow..
and it really sucks to fuck up grammatically in public..

and you know i dont give a shit about what other people think chad. it's me getting pissed at me. thats all. especially when ive gone over my writing and think ive caught all the typos and that.