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lalalalaaaaaaaa Posts: 2,445

June 2007 edited June 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art

The stillness of cold
the ghost runner holds.
Her dreams subside.
She feels denied.

Post edited by Unknown User on June 2007

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justam Posts: 21,412

June 2007

The shortness of this works well.

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DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513

June 2007

interesting.... i think i just wrote something just like this

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lalalalaaaaaaaa Posts: 2,445

June 2007

PastaNazi wrote:

interesting.... i think i just wrote something just like this

did you post it?

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DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513

June 2007

i did... it's right down the line

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