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Bone Garden

dharma69dharma69 Posts: 1,275
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Hush now, hush
Tread lightly and soft
Green grass and Baby's Breath
Cover every soul
Hush now, hush

Adorn the iron walls
Scribe the family name
Torches lit to carry on
Hush now, hush

A generation underground
Marble grey and cool as ice
An oak hangs heavy and low
The dead make nary a sound
Hush now, hush
"I'm here to see Pearl Jam."- Bono

...signed...the token black Pearl Jam fan.

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Comments

  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    Beautiful and haunting.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    pretty...



    (i'd avoid antiquated words like "nary" but aside from that... i think it's great :) )
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I like the softness in this one.
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    it to like the softness of this, but it is definately putting a soft edge on a dreary matter

    well done
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • dharma69dharma69 Posts: 1,275
    I do appreciate all of your thoughts...

    Many thanks.
    "I'm here to see Pearl Jam."- Bono

    ...signed...the token black Pearl Jam fan.

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