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When Youj're in Love wth a Lover You can't Have

Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
When You’re in Love with a Lover that You can’t Have

When You’re in Love with a Lover that You can’t Have
It can hurt inside sooooooooo so bad
You may want to jump off of the life you lead
And go meet the one you want and need

When You’re in Love with a Lover that You can’t Have
It can drive insane or just a bit insane
Yet you know that you have to lie in the bed you made
You have to give your love to the ones who crave

When You’re in Love with a Lover that You can’t Have
It will keep you in DreamLand forever and a day
Yet you know in reality it can only be for play
While you dream of life with them on a sunny day

When You’re in Love with a Lover that You can’t Have
It can make wish upon a star
That one day your life won’t be spent apart
And that soon, you'll be together
On the earth or the moon, forever and a sunny day
Create Good Things........
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  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    (slightly edited)

    [bold[When You’re in Love with a Lover that You can’t Have[/bold]

    When You’re in Love with a Lover that You can’t Have
    It can hurt inside sooooooooo so bad
    You may want to jump off of the life you lead
    And go meet the one you want and need

    When You’re in Love with a Lover that You can’t Have
    It can drive you crazzzzzzy, or just a bit insane
    Yet you know that you have to lie in the bed you made
    You have to give your love to the ones who crave

    When You’re in Love with a Lover that You can’t Have
    It will keep you in DreamLand forever and a day
    Yet you know in reality it can only be for play
    While you dream of life with them on a day

    When You’re in Love with a Lover that You can’t Have
    It can make wish upon a star
    That one day your life won’t be spent apart
    And that soon, you'll be together
    On the earth or the moon,. forever, and a day
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    an old haiku

    loving someone
    who does not love you back
    is like going to the temple
    and worshiping the ass
    of some devil god
  • bluejourneymanbluejourneyman Posts: 421
    Maybe this is all just a dream, this reality that we see.
    Can't you see that there's light in the dark.
    Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
    (Wolfmother)
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Grand Rapids 2006
  • bluejourneymanbluejourneyman Posts: 421
    I forgot to tell you that I love your poem, thanks!
    Can't you see that there's light in the dark.
    Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
    (Wolfmother)
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Grand Rapids 2006
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    I'm glad you enjoyed it BJM!

    yes, all Reality. starts with Dreams :)
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • BinFrogBinFrog MA Posts: 7,309
    "While you dream of life with them on a sunny day"


    Been there before. Great way to put it simply.
    Bright eyed kid: "Wow Typo Man, you're the best!"
    Typo Man: "Thanks kidz, but remembir, stay in skool!"
  • BinFrogBinFrog MA Posts: 7,309
    The sky framed itself tonight
    as I thought about you
    A favorite song played through the window
    as a siren was heard in the distance

    It got darker at some point
    I don't really know when
    It's hard to pay attention to such trivial things
    when there's only one thing you can think about

    This is the sort of perfect night
    that more than one pair of eyes should be seeing
    The evening just progressed by itself
    and all I could do was let it transpire

    Maybe someday you'll read these words
    Who knows, maybe I'll read them to you
    I wonder if you've written words for me
    even if only in your head




    Thought this sort of fit with this thread.
    Bright eyed kid: "Wow Typo Man, you're the best!"
    Typo Man: "Thanks kidz, but remembir, stay in skool!"
  • WhizbangWhizbang Posts: 1,314
    very nice....I like it.....hitting a chord with me.....
    believe it or not, we don't "need" anything. that is only the spoiled brat in us trying to fill some temporary solution to an emptyness that does not exist.

    I have eaten so much gold I crapped excellence - drtyfrnk29

    Life is either a daring adventure or nothing at all!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Very nice, Holey Ghost. :)

    And, Bin Frog, good to see some words from you! You don't post enough in here. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    BinFrog wrote:
    The sky framed itself tonight
    as I thought about you
    A favorite song played through the window
    as a siren was heard in the distance

    It got darker at some point
    I don't really know when
    It's hard to pay attention to such trivial things
    when there's only one thing you can think about

    This is the sort of perfect night
    that more than one pair of eyes should be seeing
    The evening just progressed by itself
    and all I could do was let it transpire

    Maybe someday you'll read these words
    Who knows, maybe I'll read them to you
    I wonder if you've written words for me
    even if only in your head




    Thought this sort of fit with this thread.

    It fits perfectly BinFrog......:) Thanks!
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    Very nice, Holey Ghost. :)

    Thanks BE! :) Glad oyou enjoyed it.
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
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