Closing Costs

CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
edited August 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
So much is happening
And I like to take it slow
Reliving my life here
I can’t seem to let it go

The door will close soon enough
And I will say goodbye
But once my new door opens
Maybe we can try

A friendship would be nice
But I don’t think you can
Thinking back to our past
Maybe you can remember when

End of September seem to be
When the closing takes place
I wonder if you’ll be there for me
Or will you allow me space

Our home will be left
Empty as the shell
Of what was our marriage was
That sweet living hell

You asked for all the copies
Of our photographed past
Makes me wonder what you think
And will it seem to last

When we speak, your harshness fades
And in your voice I hear
What I considered to be my love
And what I held so dear

Once I move you will have
This house all alone
It makes me wonder to myself
If you will call it home

It was a burden and still may be
But someone’s going to reside
Between these walls, behind these doors
With in the great divide

Will you live here, breathe me in
Know what we once were
Or will you leave it empty now
And continue living with her

A mother’s love goes too far
When she consistently criticizes you
Making me fear for your steps
And the creation of something new

Please move in when I leave
And start this new fresh life
Then I will be on my own
And no longer be your wife.
"I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
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Comments

  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i like this very much. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    i like this very much. :)
    thank you... it feels good to get some of this out.
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027

    Our home will be left
    Empty as the shell
    Of what was our marriage was
    That sweet living hell

    this part.........been there.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    the wolf wrote:
    this part.........been there.
    I know u have...that's why u are such a good friend to me:)
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
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