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LindaLinda Posts: 1,656
edited May 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
How heavy is your heart these days?
I do not know about any weight
This heart is crystal....clear...
All else falls into it's special place
From your mind right into this heart
Feeding the soul
Light as a feather yet more
than the falling moon
This love
so rare
i'm not happy yet.....
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  • Johnny_NJohnny_N Posts: 60
    Nice Linda.
  • LindaLinda Posts: 1,656
    Johnny_N wrote:
    Nice Linda.


    my first poem ever, johnny be good.....

    thanks..
    i'm not happy yet.....
  • Steve DunneSteve Dunne Posts: 4,965
    hey linda! what are you doin' over here! :D

    nice work here!!! reminds me of 'thin air'.
    I love to turn you on
  • urbanhippieurbanhippie Posts: 3,007
    Awesome :)
    A human being that was given to fly.

    Wembley 18/06/07

    If there was a reason, it was you.

    O2 Arena 18/09/09
  • LindaLinda Posts: 1,656
    Steve Dunne wrote:
    hey linda! what are you doin' over here! :D

    nice work here!!! reminds me of 'thin air'.

    not a bad reminder, i'm honored you think so, Stevie D...:D
    i'm not happy yet.....
  • LindaLinda Posts: 1,656
    urbanhippie wrote:
    Awesome :)

    thanks sweets, awesome like you are ;)
    i'm not happy yet.....
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    um linda i love your writing here
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • LindaLinda Posts: 1,656
    deadnote wrote:
    um linda i love your writing here


    thanks Kev, means alot to me that you do..
    i'm not happy yet.....
  • walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
    I love short pieces with a punch. Very nice.
  • LindaLinda Posts: 1,656
    walden freeman wrote:
    I love short pieces with a punch. Very nice.


    a punch...yeah i'm good at punching...;)
    i'm not happy yet.....
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