Coulda Used Ya

Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
edited November 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Coulda Used Ya To Talk To As A Sounding Bored
And Yeah I Meant The Typo
Coulda Used Ya To Make Me Feel Better
But I’m There On My Own
And I Can Handle It Myself, Thanks Very Much
I’ve Always Handled Me With Care
And A Loving Hand

And

I’ll Get Past This, Handling It Smoothly
As Only I Can
No Need To Worry ‘bout Me
Silly

But Still

It Would’ve Been Nice To Hear Some Sympathy
Amongst The Curiosity
Some Small Measure Of Concern
Would’ve Gone A Long Way

I Suppose It’s Hard To Feel For Someone
Who Feels For Another After That Another
Put Me Through The Sarah Palin Turkey Bleeding Machine
And Left Me Drained Of Blood
You Betcha

Still….
I Coulda Used Your Arms Around Me
And A Murmur Now And Then
To Let Me Know You Are My Friend
Feels Good Inc.
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Comments

  • Bu2 wrote:
    Coulda Used Ya To Talk To As A Sounding Bored
    And Yeah I Meant The Typo
    Coulda Used Ya To Make Me Feel Better
    But I’m There On My Own
    And I Can Handle It Myself, Thanks Very Much
    I’ve Always Handled Me With Care
    And A Loving Hand

    And

    I’ll Get Past This, Handling It Smoothly
    As Only I Can
    No Need To Worry ‘bout Me
    Silly

    But Still

    It Would’ve Been Nice To Hear Some Sympathy
    Amongst The Curiosity
    Some Small Measure Of Concern
    Would’ve Gone A Long Way

    I Suppose It’s Hard To Feel For Someone
    Who Feels For Another After That Another
    Put Me Through The Sarah Palin Turkey Bleeding Machine
    And Left Me Drained Of Blood
    You Betcha

    Still….
    I Coulda Used Your Arms Around Me
    And A Murmur Now And Then
    To Let Me Know You Are My Friend


    GREAT! I can totally relate
    vacate is the word

    cannot find the comfort in this world

    truants move on

    cannot stay long


    some die just to LIVE
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Bu2, what's the significance of all the extra capitol letters?
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  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    justam wrote:
    Bu2, what's the significance of all the extra capitol letters?

    Sheer laziness. I wrote it originally in Word, and of course every new line was capitalized even when I didn't want it to be, but I was ready for bed when I wrote it and I should've just saved it and cleaned it up the following morning and then posted it. But....I didn't. I'll eventually redo it, I guess.
    Feels Good Inc.
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