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Crazy Love

Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
edited November 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I want earth-shattering
Mouth-spattering
Heart-splattering
Love

Fireworks
1812 Overtures
Big explosions
from above

I want deep thoughts
Full of equations
Explanations
Syncopation

No frustration
No castration
Just crazy love
Crazy love

Insanity
Some profanity
Make me wonder
Make me think

Put your bones
your heart, your soul
your tears, your feelings
in your ink
Feels Good Inc.
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  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,279
    You made me think of Gwendolyn Brooks' We Real Cool; Langston Hughes for his ability to incorporate jazz into his words, and the Nuyorican Poets Cafe because it sounds like it could be a slam poem. Well Done!
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  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    You made my day!

    Heh.

    You made my day
    so much better
    than when I woke up
    into hell
    You made my day
    so much better
    since this brought me
    out of my shell

    And coming from you
    Ms. Haiku
    So full of wisdom
    full of words
    so truly you....
    I gratefully thank you
    Thank you
    for being you
    Ms. Haiku

    ;)
    Feels Good Inc.
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