Naming Names

Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
He was born of atoms, in the morning
I came later, as dusk turned to eve
He looked at me and felt complemented
I looked at him and felt love

We pass the days, walking the grounds
we pass the nights entwined
We see the flowers come to bloom
Forests, meadows, mountains, seas

With every tree, every raindrop
each cloud, we feel we're one
Nights and days roll into years
bringing others one by one

I stroke the back of a golden beast
lying in the grass
I scratch the ears behind its mane
hear its blood rumble and purr under its skin

My man stands near a black-furred creature
who raises itself on hind legs
they hug each other, holding close
barely able to bear the weight
they walk to the river
and gaze at the silver slithering things
under the surface, shining like a million suns

We stand together in a clearing
eyeing the great wings circling above
hearing it cry as if hawking its wares
before it swoops down to land on my shoulder

Centuries pass, we treasure each moment
new companions arriving in time
We name them all, every being
Even the winding, legless one
who hisses
and sticks out its tongue

I can't understand its words
but I love the way it moves
as it winds itself around the trees
whispering, gossiping, imagining things

I wonder what it's seen

All of us here with room to spare
manna for food
love for comfort
learning, caring, naming names
in the language we all share

I wonder if anyone cares, sometimes
I wonder if anyone's there
Feels Good Inc.
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Comments

  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i'll have to reread this one..you done a great job here..very awesome..
    strikes me several ways..again i'll need to read it more..thanks for posting it..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    having been inspired by your own poems, Chad, and somehow it turned into something else. I'm still not sure exactly what is going on in there, having only written it a half hour ago, but I think it's about getting back to Eden and ignoring the serpent. Not that I'm religious, I've just always been intrigued by that whole first chapter of Genesis. I like to imagine it before the fall. So that's what I did, and I wrote down what I pictured.

    Thanks for the response. I'm hoping I can do more nature-inspired stuff in the future without getting it all tangled up in big picture messages every time, heh heh.
    Feels Good Inc.
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