No Time

madjackmadjack Posts: 213
edited March 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Your son is at your house,
You better get up and run away,
You left for smokes and never came back,
Your worthless in my book,
Your thoughts mean nothing to me,
Cocksucker ? I think your smelling your own breath,
I think you even realize you suck,
I shouldn't get mad, he really don't care anymore why should I,
Go pretend your something worth while in another place,
Everyone knows you here they see how you are now,
Go pretending its everyone else not you,
Dumb FUCK!!!
Come on and play on the edge of life with me. Its fun and I love every minute of it!!!
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Comments

  • you probably know this, and my apologies for pointing it out... it's just a peeve

    but "you are"... contracted... is spelled "you're"... not "your"

    and you have a lot of you your you're's in here... it's important to discern

    :)
  • madjackmadjack Posts: 213
    Sorry about that, I was really angry when I was writing this. I need to cool off before writing or quit all together. I'm not able to edit for some strange reason.
    Come on and play on the edge of life with me. Its fun and I love every minute of it!!!
  • sachincsachinc Posts: 117
    I like the anger. Is it like EV's dad thing?
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