My first Short Story (PDF)...

lucehifenerlucehifener Posts: 84
With good will,

I just finished writing my first short story. It's a short read at 100 pages, and I wanted to see if I could get some feedback from those who enjoy what I enjoy, so I've decided to post my 3rd draft in this forum.

It's a really small file, (PDF,) and I've uploaded it to MegaUpload, since I've paid for a premium membership. It will be free to everyone who wants it, for just a little while. I want to see if I've written something worthwhile.

Of course, it's still in the final stages, so nothing is permanent.

As I said, it's a short read, and I'd love to get some feedback, so here's a free book. Let me know what you think, good or bad

Thanks.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=A7FG0E4S
Austin - Sep 16, 1995, Dallas - Jul 05, 1998, San Francisco - Jul 15, 2006, San Francisco - Jul 16, 2006, San Francisco - Jul 18, 2006, Portland - Jul 20, 2006, The Gorge - Jul 22, 2006, The Gorge - Jul 23, 2006, Seattle - Sep 21, 2009, Seattle - Sep 22, 2009, Portland - Sep 26, 2009, Philadelphia - Oct 31, 2009

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  • PS: Just to give you a bit of background on the story, here's the text I have planned for the back cover of the book...

    I had a dream one night, but was it a dream?

    What is my role in the Universe, and what is
    my role on the Earth? Is it to help everyone,
    or is it to help myself? Do I know anything?

    After getting a vague offer for a new job, Les
    is left Springing around the world to find out
    what can and can't be done to save the Earth,
    alongside random strangers who can become
    enemies to the human species and the Earth.

    But what is he? An ally or an enemy?

    What exactly is an ally or an enemy?

    What is a dream, and what is reality?
    Austin - Sep 16, 1995, Dallas - Jul 05, 1998, San Francisco - Jul 15, 2006, San Francisco - Jul 16, 2006, San Francisco - Jul 18, 2006, Portland - Jul 20, 2006, The Gorge - Jul 22, 2006, The Gorge - Jul 23, 2006, Seattle - Sep 21, 2009, Seattle - Sep 22, 2009, Portland - Sep 26, 2009, Philadelphia - Oct 31, 2009

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