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Wildfire World

Roddy ORoddy O Posts: 13
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Excessive compulsive,
Borrowed rich and task oriented,
Simplicity a dying commodity.

Lunar phase and solar rays,
Not enough time,
Quality or quantity.

Breakdown and break-up,
Accepted and irreversible,
No matter how hard we try.

Soon to fail, soon to fall,
Repetitive revolutions,
A capacity exceeded.
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Comments

  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    hey hey...

    nice piece.

    i can totally relate and i like its simplicity
  • Roddy ORoddy O Posts: 13
    Thank you,

    Roddy,
  • city_so_filthycity_so_filthy Posts: 7
    As bad as I am at writing myself I'm probably even worse at reviewing the writing of others. I never do it justice so I'll just say that I really like this. I get what you're stating and even better I like how you stated it. You're good.
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