The Man with the Black Trailing Coat

gus stillsgus stills Posts: 366
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The man with the black trailing coat
and the pushcart stacked high with
the detritus of passersby, he is
so enamored of his own insight that
he lends it without thought of recompense.

He murmurs to a starling at rest on the
budding shoot of an apple tree, telling it
“She waits not for you but for Time itself,”
and the slender bird jumps to the air,
its wings a pale crescent as it crosses the sun.

A wheel has come loose on his cart and
it wobbles as he wanders the cracked sidewalk,
gnarled roots pushing up from the fringes
of the yards along his path, to which he turns
one baleful, lazy eye and shudders.

He stoops to a blind woman on a wooden bench,
saying “You sit on the scratched lies of ten years
of accumulated heresy, woman, and there you’ll
lie as they scratch out your grave,” and he chuckles
as she stares straight ahead into a fine mist.

His beard is torn with patches of grey
and his own eyes see a Truth that he knows
is elusive to those who move from his gaze,
who find reason to cross the street and
stare suddenly into the windows of closed stores.

He stops and turns about in a shambled circle,
raises his arms to the sky and his murmur
becomes a hoarse shout, yelling “Circes no longer
waits in her crystal shell and He is come upon us,”
and his arms fall to his side with a silent whisk.

A police car turns the corner and cruises slowly
to a stop, and still he does not break stride,
but he looks to the officer who steps out and says
“Under your husk is the tremor of a thousand
angel’s wings and you know it not.”

The officer leans on the open door to his car,
its lights spinning in the mist, and stares
as the man walks on, absolved as he always
is by his honest appraisal, this man who
is the arbiter of all whom he sees and possesses.
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Comments

  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This one is interesting. I can see it all. :)
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  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    i dig this.
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • gus stillsgus stills Posts: 366
    thanks.
  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    Remarkable

    While my first thought was "Pretentious Bullshit",

    honestly I wish I could write like that
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • gus stillsgus stills Posts: 366
    thanks. any time I start messing around with capitalizing words like "truth" in my writing I always worry about that line between pretentiousness and authentic. but living in eugene i meet a lot of people like the man in this poem, and some of them do talk in capitals. i guess they just see things differently.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Unfortunately, a lot of homeless people have mental health problems and really should be on medication. Something is wrong with a system that just leaves these people to roam the streets uncared for. :(
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  • gus stillsgus stills Posts: 366
    well put. there is a guy here in town who went to high school with some of my buddies who happens to be schizophrenic. most nights he goes around town and just walks into bars and clubs, may have a drink here and there, but mostly to say hi to folks. i've given him many a beer even though i doubt he recognizes me most times. he was living in an outpatient facility last i heard, but i saw him at starbucks a couple mornings ago carrying the full on backpack with sleeping bag, etc. these people slip through the cracks. and yes, this poem is about people like my buddy, but it's also about the idea of one giving unsolicited advice, often to those who can't help but listen. and i'm fascinated with the idea of the mythological oracle. been reading some browning (caliban upon setebos, http://rpo.library.utoronto.ca/poem/267.html), and i just thought i could work at a whole bunch of these ideas at once. thanks for reading and for the comments, they're greatly appreciated.
  • gus stillsgus stills Posts: 366
    sorry, to read the browning try http://rpo.library.utoronto.ca/poem/267.html
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