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--- Unknown Love ---

JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
excellence in love resides
as we lay in planes of conscience
alone on earth, surrounded still
never mind what others think
this experience is a beautiful thing

alas one some will never know
melted down before their eyes
like the snow before our moon
but girl, what matters is
that I love you
Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

- Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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    JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Thanks, much appreciated
    After re-reading, I had to conclude I wasn't quite happy with the ending though ... :(
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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