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--- Building Fires ---

JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Building Fires

Vaguely direct, yet obviously subtle
Electric charges fill an empty room
With sparks to come
What was once meant, shall never be

A year has now come to pass
The end to silence is now near
Sparks return to shed a light
On what was meant, but has never been

If all is well, a year shall pass
Entangled in infernal arms
Of a passion so long yearned
And what was meant, should always be

Yet every inch gained
Grows a fear of losing her
Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

- Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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    here's hoping you can fan the flames a bit and make that roaring fire you so desire...

    nice poem Jamal
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
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    JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    thank you
    I'm hoping to read more from you as well :)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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    DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    interesting juxtapositioning
    hopeful, yet resigned
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    JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    why, thank you very much
    I'm flattered
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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