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JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Constant contradictions crush my skull
In the deepest darkness of despair
Ever evading my eradication
Feasting on the fragile fruits of forgiveness
The genes that gave our godly gifts
The heavenly halo above our helium-filled heads
Intentionally intriguing the immaculate
Justness juxtaposed his jealousy
Killing all that made him King
Living for a lost one’s love


Just wrote it about 3 minutes ago, hope u like it :)
Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

- Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    those are some very powerful words Jamal!

    I'm still trying to breathe it all in, while I put a helmet on and breathe in some helium.
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    thanks a lot
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • dharma69dharma69 Posts: 1,275
    Very heady, Jamal.

    And I don't mean in the helium-filled way!
    "I'm here to see Pearl Jam."- Bono

    ...signed...the token black Pearl Jam fan.

    FaceSpace
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    and still manage to make sense. I'm digging it.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    thanks guys, really appreciate the feedback :)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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