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Unclear

JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
No, I’m not drunk, maybe you aren’t either

My mind’s not clear
as never been

And now you’ve left me far too long
Just on my own, deserted butterflies
Touching every part of this
While all I want is on my mind

My mind’s not clear
never could be

Tormented souls are screaming out
I lay here, silent, and await
A fortnight’s passed, I saw you twice

My mind’s not clear
please let me be

Torch my sorrows, drown my pain
Still so young but punitive
Hope won’t fly, not that far up
Ocean-leveled, drifting by

My mind’s not clear
please make it so
Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

- Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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    Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) Very nice, Jamal! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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    Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    Jamal...very nice!

    I like how change....'never could be'

    to 'make it so"
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
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    JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Gee, thanks guys :)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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