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--- Stained ---

JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
edited October 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Where loneliness is emptiness
togetherness is loneliness
well, contradiction as it seems
tends to rule the evil dreams

You left a lovestain on the heart
your slow hands burnt right through the flesh
you left a bloodstain on the bed
Scarred you with a cut of words

***CHORUS***
You were leaving
You were gone
And you left (oooh)
left me here to bleed to death

And ironically the loser trainee
will never be one of your kind
the coldest shoulder has been given
only turns warm when you're gone

***CHORUS***

And we both pretend like we don't care
So ...

Off I go
into the sorrowsun
I'm leaving
to leave, left, left ...
For good


So, what 'd ya think?
Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

- Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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    Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    it's sad, but well-written. Sings like a song, you know what I mean?
    Feels Good Inc.
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    JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    why thank you :)

    that was kind of what I was aiming for though ;)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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