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A eufemistic suicide

JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
On this beach of broken dreams
dreams, so fragile, made of glass
Hybrid grains now cut my feet
leaving bloody footprints in my mind
the records of a long lost love
seem to haunt me in real life
for insomniacs, they have no dreams
They chew their pills and drink their Beam
Commence their eufemistic suicide
My eufemistic suicide ...
Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

- Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    submitted too soon

    just wanted to say that I wrote this in 15minutes just now.
    Straight from the heart.

    and just for the matter : it's 02:24 right now in Belgium, so ;)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Jamal wrote:
    submitted too soon

    just wanted to say that I wrote this in 15minutes just now.
    Straight from the heart.

    and just for the matter : it's 02:24 right now in Belgium, so ;)

    kudos to you.
    are you familiar with soundgarden's 'like suicide'?


    and as i am a bit of a spelling nazi, it's euphemistic. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    I'd heard of it, and apparently I own the "superunknown" album, but i had never really sat down to listen to it . (shame on me)
    Great track.

    As for the spelling : sorry :$ , in dutch, it's spelled with an "f" and it was kind of late already, forgive me ?
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    you've done nothing that needs to be forgiven.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    awesome!...~
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    @ catefrances : i know, j/k
    @ eddie's tone rocks : thx mate
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
    I like it! Show us more!
    I'll be back
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    I'm in the middle of my exams, so I don't really have the time ...
    And there's plenty of unfinished business on my desk, also a lot of crap, but hey ...
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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