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JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The reflection in the kitchen mirror
now reflects inside his mind
blinding like the summer’s sun
crystal clear now turns to grey
It’s so crowded in his otherwise deserted room

Pictures of her
turned away
they stand
on a bedside cabinet

The reflection on the water surface
now reflects inside her mind
burning like a solar flare
close the blinds before her eyes
It’s so gloomy in her otherwise enlightened head

Pictures of him
turned away
they stand
on a bedside cabinet

The lights are out now and it’s dark in here
Still the light reflects in the backsides of their empty skulls
Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

- Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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  • very nice Jamal!

    Reflections pf the mind
    Like time
    Relative
    to the observer
    Create Good Things........
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    first of all, thanks,


    I remember he used to take her by the hand
    I remember the way she used to look at him
    I remember her friends said this was it
    I remember all the times when they were close
    Those times, those days, that, he remembers

    I remember his abscence
    I remember his return
    I remember she was gone
    I remember he got better
    Those times, those days, that, he's desperatley trying to forget

    I remember her comeback
    I remember she begged and begged
    I remember he folded again
    I just remembered, this is now !

    For times to come and days to pass, I hope they're worth remembering
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    Very good work!
    Feels Good Inc.
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