---Master Pupil ---

JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
He never thought about nothing but thinking
Now he just sits there, he’ll never stop drinking

***CHORUS***
Days go and fly by
Like birds in the rain
Kiss his verses drenched in pain

Gentle, free, … and so constrained
Emotionless incontinence, he starts slowly leaking

***CHORUS***

He swallowed all to salvage this ONE
And now he just sits there, he just sits there
He’s empty

***CHORUS***

Sticky and red, a substance lost
And they, they sign their names with the blood on my voice

***CHORUS***

The teacher and teachings, they now go unheard
For the pupil has now mastered all that he has learned
Still his puzzles lie shattered

***CHORUS***

And fate taught him well
But I taught her all
Still fate taught us well
But I’m the one who taught her all
But I’m the one who taught her all
But I’m the one who taught her all
Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

- Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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  • Good one Jamal

    Fate tries to teach ull in the face of destiny

    Dentiny that either leads us, or we lead it

    ...I'm afraid if one overdulges anthing

    ............that thing, will be their chains
    ...................that pull them, that pains them
    .............................the pulls them dlown the drain

    So, do you disdain, refrain?

    I moderate, not qute overdoing it, or ever going over the edge

    I like to have a bit of control, over my distiny and fate
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • very beautiful writing....
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Thanks a lot...
    I wrote it on the trainride home yesterday :)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Jamal wrote:
    Thanks a lot...
    I wrote it on the trainride home yesterday :)


    well keep riding on the train....cuz thats beautiful.....very beautiful...
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
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