--- The legend of a greater king ---

JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The legend of a greater king

Tales of kings and fallen gods
have long been passed from mouth to ear
Of blood, been shed by means of tears
immortals cannot kill our will to live
The time has come to rise above

***Chorus***
All beginnings have their end
And now it’s time to set sail, set sail

A schizophrenic god’s betrayal
lies pinned upon the sleeves of a king
command to worship, bow before
his eye are frozen, his body’s numb
and he just wants to see her crawl

He stands checkmate in the game of love
and cries lost tears for freedom’s sake
rides to battle with flags and shields
yet he fights his battles all alone
another life, taken for granted

***Chorus***
DE-DE-CRATE ME !!!

Burn places of prayer
where idols are false
bow down before me
it’s your turn to CRAWL !!!!!


thanks for reading,... and for inspiring me to start writing again.
Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

- Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    We need that edit button mods...... :(

    It should say "DE-SE-CRATE ME"
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • lucylespianlucylespian Posts: 2,403
    Yeah, I was wondering why you needed to be unpacked, long journey maybe, bad jetlag !! LOL !!
    Music is not a competetion.
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Yeah, I was wondering why you needed to be unpacked, long journey maybe, bad jetlag !! LOL !!
    unpacked??
    I think you lost me here ... :p
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Jamal wrote:
    unpacked??
    I think you lost me here ... :p
    Yeah, I figured it out now
    with a little help from my friends :D

    sorry, I'm a little slow these last days
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    I'm re-writing this one now
    Re-reading it after a couple of days gives you a totally different insight :(
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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