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American angel

ByrnzieByrnzie Posts: 21,037
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
American angel
you are a light,
a shining beauty
where the sun goes down

I sleep in your waking
unknown, and silent
a thousand crashing waves distant

I send you a kiss
on the Atlantic breeze
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  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    Very nice Byrnzie.
    I hope you'll visit with us on P+P more often.
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • ByrnzieByrnzie Posts: 21,037
    Brainofdz wrote:
    Very nice Byrnzie.
    I hope you'll visit with us on P+P more often.

    He he!
    I only seem to come on here when I've got a few beers under my belt.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Byrnzie wrote:
    He he!
    I only seem to come on here when I've got a few beers under my belt.

    hah! cause no one here ever posts under the influence. ;):D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I post sober, but I have to be drunk to read. :p:D


    Good'un, Byrnzie! :)
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    Byrnzie wrote:
    American angel
    you are a light,
    a shining beauty
    where the sun goes down

    I sleep in your waking
    unknown, and silent
    a thousand crashing waves distant

    I send you a kiss
    on the Atlantic breeze


    Ah Byrnzie, that's beautiful love. But I thought you knew I was an Aussie? :confused:;):D
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • ByrnzieByrnzie Posts: 21,037
    Jeanie wrote:
    Ah Byrnzie, that's beautiful love. But I thought you knew I was an Aussie? :confused:;):D

    Whoops! I meant to say Atlantic, then the south Atlantic, and then Pacific, via the Indian ocean. :p
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    Byrnzie wrote:
    American angel
    you are a light,
    a shining beauty
    where the sun goes down

    I sleep in your waking
    unknown, and silent
    a thousand crashing waves distant

    I send you a kiss
    on the Atlantic breeze

    is this about Mr. T?
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
  • ByrnzieByrnzie Posts: 21,037
    dunkman wrote:
    is this about Mr. T?

    No. It's about my sweetheart... http://heyokamagazine.com/obese.jpg
  • redrockredrock Posts: 18,341
    a different side of Byrnzie.... :) Nice one... :)
  • ByrnzieByrnzie Posts: 21,037
    redrock wrote:
    a different side of Byrnzie.... :) Nice one... :)

    You typed that at the exact same time I typed my last post above. :D Brilliant!
  • redrockredrock Posts: 18,341
    redrock wrote:
    a different side of Byrnzie.... :) Nice one... :)

    Edit: I spoke too soon.. just saw your last post B.!
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    Byrnzie wrote:
    No. It's about my sweetheart... http://heyokamagazine.com/obese.jpg


    in all seriousness if i was drunk enough i probably would :o

    and where do those people buy underwear??? is there companies out there who make things in that size.. i wouldnt have thought there was a market for it :confused: well apart from america :p
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
  • redrockredrock Posts: 18,341
    GUYS!!!!!! This started out a nice thread..... :(
  • ByrnzieByrnzie Posts: 21,037
    redrock wrote:
    GUYS!!!!!! This started out a nice thread..... :(

    I blame Jeanie. She started us on this downward spiral.
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    Byrnzie wrote:
    I blame Jeanie. She started us on this downward spiral.

    hmmm....don't know how it got to be my fault! :p

    You're the one who seems to be carrying on like a sailor!!!! :D

    I don't think I've taken you anywhere you didn't really want to go. ;)
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • ByrnzieByrnzie Posts: 21,037
    Jeanie wrote:
    hmmm....don't know how it got to be my fault! :p

    You're the one who seems to be carrying on like a sailor!!!! :D

    I don't think I've taken you anywhere you didn't really want to go. ;)

    I'm easily lead. :p
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    Byrnzie wrote:
    I'm easily lead. :p

    So it would seem, you poor misguided fellow! ;)

    It was a nice poem, anyway. :)
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Jeanie wrote:
    So it would seem, you poor misguided fellow! ;)

    It was a nice poem, anyway. :)

    it's the eve defense jeanie. :D poor adams with no self control. :( :p
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    catefrances wrote:
    it's the eve defense jeanie. :D poor adams with no self control. :( :p

    Oh I got that about it cate. :)

    I was just giving my usual, diplomatic response. :D
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Jeanie wrote:
    Oh I got that about it cate. :)

    I was just giving my usual, diplomatic response. :D


    well tonight i am not in the mood for diplomacy.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    catefrances wrote:
    well tonight i am not in the mood for diplomacy.

    fair enough. let him have it then. :)

    kidding! kidding!! :eek: don't hurt him cate! :D
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    catefrances wrote:
    well tonight i am not in the mood for diplomacy.

    oooohhh scary :)



    no seriously... it was scary!
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    dunkman wrote:
    oooohhh scary :)



    no seriously... it was scary!

    oh yeah scooby doo scary. :p:D

    but seriously i'm not in a diplomatic mood tonight.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    redrock wrote:
    a different side of Byrnzie.... :) Nice one... :)

    or a side less known!!

    Nice, Mr. B!
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • small town becksmall town beck Posts: 6,691
    Jeanie wrote:
    hmmm....don't know how it got to be my fault! :p

    You're the one who seems to be carrying on like a sailor!!!! :D

    I don't think I've taken you anywhere you didn't really want to go. ;)


    LMFAO :D

    A sailor? It seems like Byrnzie gets around more than the whole Royal Navy! :p;)
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    small town beck wrote:
    LMFAO :D

    A sailor? It seems like Byrnzie gets around more than the whole Royal Navy! :p;)


    hmmm....well it's starting to look that way!! :D

    least he's still romantic when he's pissed!!! :D
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • ByrnzieByrnzie Posts: 21,037
    small town beck wrote:
    LMFAO :D

    A sailor? It seems like Byrnzie gets around more than the whole Royal Navy! :p;)

    :eek:
  • small town becksmall town beck Posts: 6,691
    Byrnzie wrote:
    :eek:

    :p:p:p


    It is cute how you feign innocence ;):p:D
  • ByrnzieByrnzie Posts: 21,037
    small town beck wrote:
    :p:p:p


    It is cute how you feign innocence ;):p:D

    :p
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    Jeanie wrote:
    hmmm....well it's starting to look that way!! :D

    least he's still romantic when he's pissed!!! :D


    yeah romantic... yeah thats what he is when he's pissed *blank stare*
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
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