Out of the tube

ByrnzieByrnzie Posts: 21,037
edited December 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
ensnared by a wave
of expectation
pulling me to a grave
in life
of death
I will never surrender
the fight
the shoulder to the wheel
of time
of fate
the fight
to ride the tide
in eternity
free of the weight
of others
and feel the breeze
of timelessness
i will stand
on the sea
and breathe
an air of invincibility
Your words
and your prizes
will never
trap me
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    "i will stand
    on the sea
    and breathe
    an air of invincibility"

    I especially like that part. :) but the whole poem is nice. never knew you had a side like this in you. :) very cool!
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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