pretense
stateofloventrust12
Posts: 88
ok this is my first shot at releasing one of my songs to anyone except one of my close friends.
i just need to know if its any good, its short but i might add some more later.
Present frozen
Thoughts dissected, left wide open
Seeping through cracks
Seeing reality and everything it lacks
Indifference is my middle name
Taking the punches
And taking the blame
And ill keep my memories of you
In the pretense
In the pretense (x2)
Pretension only for myself
For your memories are already boxed
Gathering dust upon the shelf
In the pretense
PRETENSE (x whatever)
i just need to know if its any good, its short but i might add some more later.
Present frozen
Thoughts dissected, left wide open
Seeping through cracks
Seeing reality and everything it lacks
Indifference is my middle name
Taking the punches
And taking the blame
And ill keep my memories of you
In the pretense
In the pretense (x2)
Pretension only for myself
For your memories are already boxed
Gathering dust upon the shelf
In the pretense
PRETENSE (x whatever)
An ounce of deception
Kills a pound of pain
Kills a pound of pain
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