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Song I wrote

DiRtyFranK38DiRtyFranK38 Posts: 3,131
edited November 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
ok, so i'm new to this section of the pit .. i always linger on the porch and other areas .. however, i decided today to sit down and write something. i am 16 years old and don't have a lifetime full of specific experiences to back me up, but i felt like writing about something .. it's a bit of just a general realization with one verse being kind of specific .. anyways, check it out and let me know what you think ..

http://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=songpx9.jpg
2006: Hartford
2008: MSG 1, Hartford, Mansfield 2, Ed Solo NYC 1
2009: London (O2), Philly 1, 2, 3, & 4
2010: Hartford, Boston, MSG 1 & 2
2011: Ed Solo Hartford
2012: Philly (MIA Fest)
2013: Worcester 2, Brooklyn 1 & 2, Hartford
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  • demetriosdemetrios Posts: 92,619
    i like it! :)
  • sweet leafsweet leaf Posts: 29
    demetrios wrote:
    i like it! :)

    Me too! Do you have music to go along with the lyrics? Play any instruments? Who are your influences?
    vacate is the word

    cannot find the comfort in this world

    truants move on

    cannot stay long


    some die just to LIVE
  • 395486pj10395486pj10 Posts: 95
    I also really like it. I've tried writing songs myself and I found it to be very hard. I'd love to read more of your work!
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