calm

gtx

voices listening to the reach
the attempt of sand in the breach
the glass so smooth passing hours
the grains falling building towers
time measured in the waves
your future love reaches back and saves
lifting me up in my dreams
lips closeing space in between.

DopeBeastie

this is actually really good

i'd fiddle with the consonant count in the last two lines, but holla! nice work!

justam

I like this one.