in the storm

gtx

everyone and everyone
beneath the sun
i call out to see a breeze and paint a new sky
over a canvas of steam
drifting over a shapless nameless
streaking in the park
venting a new cry
tears exposing unkown emotion
even to the wells from wich they are drwn
the abrasion of the wind and currents
reaking havok around a globe and neon strobe
srtetching out a probe and a whip of steal
aftermath and chaos rain down
on the back of the mice and his wheel
evasion and choice are beyond comprehension
missing pages from a self concieved thesourus
calling names labeled around a can of soup
mixed assorted fruits of a loneley tree
swing branches a crisp new bundle of premature leaves
creeping slowley endless
dancing childlike and blameless.

Being Enlightened

This poem made me feel like I was caught in a whilrwind! Good stuff, gtx.

midnight tunes

I enjoyed this, more please...welcome to the board

gtx

thanks for the warm welcome, there is so much creativity here i really like it.

push and pull me
i don't know where to begin
lost in something
or original sin
taken pieces
im a shattering mould
gripped with thinkin
shards progressivley sold

out of time and pushed against the seam
of reality or realities dream
the wake of sun dancing inwardly blest
like all the apples peeled and put to the test

forcing grip but handle withholds
a race for being before the being gets old
hold the taste of a weathered feel
but the chords of love are the freshest seal

wake me make me
see the other side of we
baked on my knees
be as kind as trees
arching brooding and giving to all
before the end even the stars will fall
heaven shaken
and a heavenly hand
i've found my love
shared footprints in the sand

midnight tunes

very good, did you just sit down and write that last poem? amazing!

gtx

glad you liked it, yeah just off the top of head, if i haven't written anything for a while it just pours out effortlessly, i think it's like a release valve of something:) I'm liking your style too, in fact everones that ive read so far is really inspiring.

karma defect

gtx wrote:

everyone and everyone
beneath the sun
i call out to see a breeze and paint a new sky
over a canvas of steam
drifting over a shapless nameless
streaking in the park
venting a new cry
tears exposing unkown emotion
even to the wells from wich they are drwn
the abrasion of the wind and currents
reaking havok around a globe and neon strobe
srtetching out a probe and a whip of steal
aftermath and chaos rain down
on the back of the mice and his wheel
evasion and choice are beyond comprehension
missing pages from a self concieved thesourus
calling names labeled around a can of soup
mixed assorted fruits of a loneley tree
swing branches a crisp new bundle of premature leaves
creeping slowley endless
dancing childlike and blameless.

Beauttifull writting, I've read it through a few times.
think I'll read it more often to truely understand.
Nice words, well painted.