just venting

gtx

earthquake
mind state
ripping in the surf break

all the time
the sands of mine
riding on the open vine

victim of a crooked dream
lucid as the poets scream
diversion of an undertake
listen to the earth shake

bullets bouncing overtime
breezing in the bell chime

inside
with the tide
bleeding on the otherside

blink
sink
embroided ink
chorus for the mind link

entertain
the brain slain
maybe dancing in the rain

Mystique420

gtx wrote:

earthquake
mind state
ripping in the surf break

all the time
the sands of mine
riding on the open vine

victim of a crooked dream
lucid as the poets scream
diversion of an undertake
listen to the earth shake

bullets bouncing overtime
breezing in the bell chime

inside
with the tide
bleeding on the otherside

blink
sink
embroided ink
chorus for the mind link

entertain
the brain slain
maybe dancing in the rain

This was excellent! I read it about 3 times already. You've got talent. Do you publish your work, create music for these powerful thoughts??? Impressive,.. truly!

gtx

thank you for the kind words Mystique420, no nothing professional, but i write songs on the guitar in my spare time and my brother plays drums but mainly just to release, not relly to do anthing with as a profession. I only found these boards about a week ago so i only freetsyle when im here.thanks i really enjoyed reading yours too, are you published or anything like that. everytime i come were i get blown away by the thoughts that everone has and the freedom of expression is a breeze going through.