Inspiring Dies

Steve DunneSteve Dunne Posts: 4,965
edited March 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I had an idea for a poem
But forgot it on the highway
I was listening to a song of yours
And then the music stopped

My inspiration died a sad death
Much like your inspiration in me
That song will always be there
Yet the miles between us grows
I love to turn you on
Post edited by Unknown User on

Comments

  • how bout

    the mile between us grows

    or

    the miles between us grow

    ???

    i like this :)
  • Steve DunneSteve Dunne Posts: 4,965
    i know i know...i hate typos in this forum...damn missing edit feature!

    (thanks - your addition(s) is what i was going for..)
    I love to turn you on
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