first poem

deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
edited April 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
nothing seems tto end
and im holding on to you
what should i do today
what should i tomorrow
if only i could see you again
if loving you
brought us together
holding all the aanswers
and babies eating food
then life would be traveling
and playing in the rain
when its dark
then i will pray
to be with you again
set your laughter free

dreamer in my dream

we got the guns

i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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  • nice poem deadnote!
    kisses
    "You're the eve of my destruction in the garden of fears"
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    i dont know how to do this
    i feel like im put away
    like a box of things
    you never go thru

    still i appreciate

    where are you now
    i hear you in the sound
    of the wind in her presence
    how did we lose the telephone

    visit us again

    so close i feel you low
    i wonder if i could grow
    since now i feel im broke
    was in the waves

    still i feel alone
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • PEACEMAKER


    As if on command
    Our dog
    Wedges between us
    To stop the fighting

    His eyes plead
    For peace

    And I remember
    How precious
    Time is to him
    "Goddamn Romans. Sure know how to make a ... drum room." --Matt Cameron
  • deadnote wrote:
    i dont know how to do this
    i feel like im put away
    like a box of things
    you never go thru

    still i appreciate

    where are you now
    i hear you in the sound
    of the wind in her presence
    how did we lose the telephone

    visit us again

    so close i feel you low
    i wonder if i could grow
    since now i feel im broke
    was in the waves

    still i feel alone
    it's pretty good!
    "You're the eve of my destruction in the garden of fears"
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    i make dreams
    out of these words
    and still i fall asleep
    before i pray

    every day
    i want you
    i make my way
    with this gun

    but nothing ever changes
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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