a new helmet song

deadnote

he loves all of the girls
but he doesnt respect boys
he brought a virus into the world
and prescious flowers he chose
to love so much

and he hung himself
and he fucked himself
and he never died
made deals with everyone

and its a sad day
when you dont care
that your hated

deadnote

the good old days of ages 1 thourhg 4
when i didnt remember a thing
or was it all just a snap of the fingers
springing me to life

sorrounded by everything the eyes could see
choosing with my eyes
and paying with my heart
im so dark
so sad
and so dark

the early years have faded away
and im so glad i cant chnage you
for you stand so tall and you make the sky blue

you are my everything
i will alwasy
search for you

sickwillie

I usually don't post feedback, but I figured since you so kindly asked me to "spit into a mirror", why not offer a little constructive criticism?

- "your hated" is not a valid phrase, as "hated" is not a noun. I believe you were after "you're hated".

- Come to think of it, your spelling is atrocious throughout. Or are your bandaged wrists getting in the way of proper key stroking?

- Refusal of caps and/or proper punctuation and/or cohesive structure does not make you any better a poet.

The next time you feel the need to make a snide comment like you left for me, write some better fucking poetry to justify your outburst. At least better than this emo whinefest. Helmet would be ashamed of this.