you have two names

deadnote

weary mind
no answers
an infinite point of degree
run into walls

crossing over
into light
hands upraised
nothing to write

falling down
into reality
the deepest ocean
lying alone

deadnote

i wasnt given understanding
whats in my heart
maybe someday
i will wake up
maybe i will have the chance
to say goodbye
or to say hello

i know that if you love me
and im creatin
youve got it all

i wont take
can i stay
can i stay

i wont take
can i stay
can i stay

deadnote

the future is slipping through my hands
doubting sprouting
sorrounded by death
i still come

let me out let me out
god please set me free
bring her back to this world
and morph me to hop

deadnote

me giving nothing
i complain til
the closet doors broke
and then im given five bucks
and i smile

how sick to be here
chained to the peer
its a beautiful sight
but my senses arent tight
i fight and fight

and all the moving things are gone
the picture doesnt move around
its like a still video game
and i love when the tv shakes

100,000 strong

deadnote

collaboration
a bible
i drift away
from your presciousness
i drift away alone

my heart pained
i love you
your effort
its great
rewind
im dead

i remember the video
the instrument in your hand
i could see you dance
and when i looked up to see
you stopped

deadnote

the season leaves a trail
but the call
is untraceable
wall after wall
until the pain rests
i will look for you

what a man that boasts
resides to fall asleep
the fingertips have life
the shyness is a burden

two people
0 resources

deadnote

i stand below what ive learned
theres no way to escape
you stay and leave me feeling sick
proving to me in phsycotic ways
that your there

i crack a smile
every once in awhile
it appears in the middle
of a storm

not right not right
i dont agree with this course

two languages that burn like fire
along this path i fall in love
with a child

and leave them
with the sickest nature
that could ever be

deadnote

i wanna be saved
i wanna help save
i wanna be true
wanna be with you

i wanna be strong
wanna give love

deadnote

body bounces to the music
i cant be that bad
i feel pretty good

i want the power
to watch the flower
i just need the spirit
the hand of release

just because i beg
to get of myself
it doesnt give reason
for good and bad

chadwick

deadnote:

you're a deeply interesting pile of flesh with bone.
or is it, bone with flesh.
perhaps either or, with some rainy night desert mud.
never forget that you're every endless ocean even tho all the while
you're an award winning bowl of popcorn.

be well.

depopulationINC

hmmm
I will have to re-read these a few times.

I rather enjoyed them

this one in particular has my interest peeked



collaboration
a bible
i drift away
from your presciousness
i drift away alone

my heart pained
i love you
your effort
its great
rewind
im dead

i remember the video
the instrument in your hand
i could see you dance
and when i looked up to see
you stopped

Buru

I have to start of by saying that this poetry style is not my favourite,
I'm usually more inclined to imagery, and I feel like some of the ideas or thoughts you express can be explored further

I do perceive the words you write as flashes of concience, of your thoughts
at times jumping from one thought to the other
but this jump is too quick, in my opinion - it does not let you feel the whole emotions...

that being said, there are a couple lines/ideas that work nicely in these poems you have posted

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i thinkit's a great read

I loved reading malloy - a brain spilling on a page thought at a time