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deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
edited September 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i got a relative
that i cant see
i look in the mirror
cant see nothin

they told me before
that i look like my mom
i know better than that



sending a thank you to neil
set your laughter free

dreamer in my dream

we got the guns

i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    that poem i think doesnt express the relationship im trying to express
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    for the love of my mom i have to say thatthis thread is not anything nere what im trying to say
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • shareshare Posts: 551
    some times I get you and it's beautiful
    we're all sentient snowflakes
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    I'm a number that doesn't count
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    the nothing ventured - the nothing feigned
  • 15 minutes15 minutes Posts: 50
    deadnote wrote:
    i got a relative
    that i cant see
    i look in the mirror
    cant see nothin

    they told me before
    that i look like my mom
    i know better than that



    sending a thank you to neil

    you are most welcome.
    I've never met Ed,never shook his hand, talked to him or had my picture taken with him.
    But I did stay at a Holiday Inn Express last night.
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