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goodbye

deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i gave my all
now my feet they burn
my heart is broken
my skin is raw

its not about the labor
its not about the pay
its about the plans
they all said goodbye
set your laughter free

dreamer in my dream

we got the guns

i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    short, and kind of vague, but powerful

    i like ...
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    this is sad
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    twin1 wrote:
    this is sad

    I agree. It makes me think of someone forlornly looking out their kitchen window on a rain soaked day, watching the love of their life drive away, knowing that they're never going to come home again--the last goodbye... :(
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    This person sounds tired too. :(
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