okay

deadnote

so someone said they might puke if they read another bad poem so i figured puke ........yum


i woke up this morning i was in your arms again
we started dancing and singing searching for songs to mend
the way we lost ourselves the death we just escaped
it all touched me in a way i honor the grave

flowers for mom and flowers for daughters flowers for sisters
flowers for fathers flowers for sons flowers for brothers

i didnt give thanks until you knocked upon my door
i thought of yesterday when i was laying on the floor
just get me out of this and help me make it home
for forever love lives on even when we give up on hope

flowers for everyone

Holey Ghost

I like the message Deadnote

...Forever, Love lives on

....and no one, should ever give up on hope

Jamal

Holey Ghost wrote:

...Forever, Love lives on

As does life love on ........... i hope

Holey Ghost

Absolutely....life loves on, eternally

DopeBeastie

i think that post is two and a half years old, lol...

but, this is not a bad poem at all! i especially dig the first stanza... it has a very nice gait to it



i didn't mean to offend by bumping that... sorry :(