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deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
edited February 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
these scars will not control me
i will use them as a light
in the deepest darkest ocean
look into my eyes so close
so right
so close
i see you now
i feel you now
i see you now
i feel you now

exercise with everyone
so right so close
look into our eyes
the deepest darkest ocean
a light
set your laughter free

dreamer in my dream

we got the guns

i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    you got a really powerful gun
    put my imagination
    under the sun
    bubbling in facsination
    breathing for love
    dying for it

    ill go home
    and find my way
    dial numbers
    make my day
    communicate free love
    the timing is god

    like a lovely dream
    i fly to the stars
    like a lovely dream
    i fly to the stars
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    three eyes weakly
    two stare into you
    i dont pray for it
    i just look into them
    go away now
    and let me be
    i like to worry
    about other things
    like skin buttons
    that i dont control
    loving me freely
    loving is home
    loving is hope
    loving alone
    sad
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    deadnote wrote:
    three eyes weakly
    two stare into myself
    i dont pray for it
    i just look into them
    go away now
    and let me be
    i like to worry
    about other things
    like skin buttons
    that i dont control
    loving me freely
    loving is home
    loving is hope
    loving alone
    sad

    edit
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    laying in a bed
    thinking of a verse
    it floats away from me
    without any attempt
    it leaves my life
    and i come here
    lonely
    with nothing

    wanting something more
    to give
    to shine upon
    a glaring weakness
    that i stand before

    how much does it hurt
    to walk away with nothing
    as all your stuff lies alone
    unread
    reach out a hand
    and be my keyboard
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    giving all i have to this eye
    it hurts to retire
    from loving you
    i have no chance
    your ring costs a grand
    my friend hasnt called
    he knows the score

    even when its time
    to go be a good kid
    im listening to the side
    that twinkles like charlie

    and all i want
    is to swing
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    to sweet desire
    i reside
    what word meant
    i find love
    in pain
    but veering from faith
    i cannot
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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