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deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
edited February 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
infested
unrest
death
hating you
becoming me
killing
fufilling
willing to
rid this world
of you
liars
set your laughter free

dreamer in my dream

we got the guns

i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    didnt expect to get any replies for this thought
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    your time is up
    now join the club
    take my hand
    and go to hell

    fuck your jesus
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • binauralmanbinauralman Posts: 83
    yikes.. your jesus as in who's jesus?
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    who's jesus?
    i don't know who i'm writing to
    the idealism is loving
    the sacrifice is uncalled for
    therefore
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • binauralmanbinauralman Posts: 83
    hmm understood, maybe it was done in a divine way that us 'humans' cannot understand. Something neccessary.. maybe it just won't hurt to appreciate it instead of hating... ( sorry im preaching ) much love ;)
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    interesting how love can curb the impending hate
    same to you
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    deadnote wrote:
    interesting how love can curb the impending hate
    same to you

    Why were you feeling so full of hate?
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    my life has been a joke
    i have thankfullness for human beings who know and feel life and love
    but when life and love is ripped away from so many people my faith teeters
    and inevitably ends up in my signature
    which will stand til the day i die
    theres nothing that can take away the loss that i have felt and seen
    i wonder if god gets a laugh out of the things it does
    if god sheds tears then im jesus christ
    i am full of hate
    but peace and love for human beings are my dream
    god be damned
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • kerri_luckerkerri_lucker Posts: 5
    so much agression and no real reason as to why? u can message me in private, but after walking thru hell & high water i want to know where your rage is coming from??? i know what reasons i have to hate god,... DO YOU?
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I feel sad for the ones
    waking up to disillusionment for the first time
    I remember how impossible that was
    heart-in-pieces-on-the-floor
    love, so grand, seemed like a cruel joke
    :(
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    justam wrote:
    I feel sad for the ones
    waking up to disillusionment for the first time
    I remember how impossible that was
    heart-in-pieces-on-the-floor
    love, so grand, seemed like a cruel joke
    :(

    a cruel joke that sometimes came
    with a punchline straight to
    the head of the disillusioned.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    deadnote wrote:
    didnt expect to get any replies for this thought


    hang in there.
    the sun will shine again.
    and when it rains, curl up with a book
    listen to some music, whatever.

    "this too shall pass"
  • binauralmanbinauralman Posts: 83
    everything will be ok, funny how I suggest to relax when I can barely do it myself but sometimes we're at a stage in life when we're in trouble we can only give hope to our dear friends. Prayer, Hope and faith!
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    i told her i was killing myself
    and she said okay
    just go away
    dont talk to me
    so i erased everything
    and started calling out names
    and she came back
    to save me
    but i feel like its to late
    spiritually dead
    is how i feel
    and the clock exploded
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i'm liking your darkness at the moment deadnote.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    deadnote wrote:
    i told her i was killing myself
    and she said okay
    just go away
    dont talk to me
    so i erased everything
    and started calling out names
    and she came back
    to save me
    but i feel like its to late
    spiritually dead
    is how i feel
    and the clock exploded

    :(
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