confidence

deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
edited December 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
all around me the light shines
all around you the light shines
focus in the dark
focus in the dark
it only takes a couple seconds

we are given beautiful sight
and beauty lies everywhere
day or night

all around you the memories shine
all around you the memories shine

sorry i keep posting lame poetry but its the best i got
set your laughter free

dreamer in my dream

we got the guns

i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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Comments

  • fact is...
    it's not lame

    how long have you been writing?
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    ive been trying since i was really young im 33 now
    ive been up against the wall for about two years now

    thanks i appreciate your kindness
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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