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deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
edited February 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
waiting wondering hesitation
fading still praying erasing
loving hopeful playing
for your words to love me

regret repent descending
nervous action satisfied
still alive counting seconds
hoping your words will love me

its raining instinct taimed
depression reflection yesterday
hard on myself expelled
learning your words are teaching

spirit confined flying blind
distractions reaction bliss
sending a kiss and a hold
praying things dont change
set your laughter free

dreamer in my dream

we got the guns

i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    love me now
    dont care how
    lost and wild
    burning nature
    im healing
    walking on the ceiling
    ascending newborn
    angels singing
    alive and breathing
    feelings ignorant
    dream of halos
    a light sorrounds
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I especially like how you wrote "hoping your words will love me." :)
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    fight a war with a pencil
    as they laugh all the way
    finally see the truth
    poking in through the shades
    i smile to protect
    all your guns direct
    but love is the only king
    so laugh at me beast

    your kind isnt so true

    standing ovation clapping
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    who killed goliath?
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    he killed himself from laughing so hard

    i see you over there clapping laughing
    proud of yourself

    fuck off
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    deadnote wrote:
    he killed himself from laughing so hard

    i see you over there clapping laughing
    proud of yourself

    fuck off

    ??
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    a crazzy man busts out his gun
    his most prized possession
    under the sun
    when all the people
    just stood there and laughed
    he couldnt take anymore
    so he just snapped
    and now hes just a memory
    in a mind that will never see
    a life that was long
    so quickly erased
    i cant fucking believe
    so instant the hate

    its easy to fight when you are all knowing
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I think I walked into the wrong thread.

    I'll just quietly step back out.
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    as i walked through the night
    i could feel your gun
    penetrating my soul
    you were having fun
    and when i thought about it
    i didnt feel scared
    for i know when i leave
    god will be waiting there
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    Listen man,
    guns are shit.
    Throw away your weapons.
    Violence is uncalled for.
    There's better ways to resolve your disputes.
    Are you gonna tell me to fuck off too?
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    you are aware that there is such a thing as suspension of belief that occurs when one writes, right? not everything we write comes from our lives nor it is necessarily directed at anyone. yuo get in a moment and it pours out of you onto the page. but sure you want to be told to fuck off then that too can be arranged i'm sure. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    i wish you peace dn.
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    catefrances wrote:
    you are aware that there is such a thing as suspension of belief that occurs when one writes, right? not everything we write comes from our lives nor it is necessarily directed at anyone. yuo get in a moment and it pours out of you onto the page. but sure you want to be told to fuck off then that too can be arranged i'm sure. :)


    yeah, i am definitely aware of that
    but I am also aware of other things too.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    jamjam wrote:
    yeah, i am definitely aware of that
    but I am also aware of other things too.

    as am i. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    this cursing of mine was simply ignorant on my part
    i should be more aware of the consequenses
    it was not for you though
    obviously i have some issues to work on
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    no, I over-reacted to something else.
    Curse all you want :)
    It's a good way of expressing feelings.
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