im tired

deadnote

i know this is for poetry but im at the end of an emotion
i need vitamins someone to hold a phone call
all those things i said
all those acts
and then the ones i never read
whats this life about
is this how you feel
or do you know
maybe i dont wanna know
sharing is everything now
cut me into pieces
just spend the night with me
smile like you once did
sing to me like you can

deadnote

what would one phone call do to change the course of human history ?

Coathanger Halos

I like that this is written rather simply. It certainly proves that less is more.

justam

Get some rest and maybe you'll start to feel better. As difficult as it is to realize, you can't force anyone to do something they don't want to do.

I hope tomorrow is better for you.

jamjam

Deadnote--
I'm tired too, so I've made up my mind
I'm going to take vitamins.

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for you - to feel better!
Rest really is the best.

kdpjam

jamjam, better day to you. i take vitamins. but i am tired too, so i guess its time to.. crash out.

jamjam

thanx kd---
a glass of wine (maybe a few )
is just right to knock me out tonight.

deadnote

i wonder whats up
my mind screws itself into oblivion
what does it mean
tomatoes and french fries
being alone
are you alone
together alone
jealousy
wishing to be a boy
wanting to show some evolution
something new inside of me
satisfying your nature
crying is it to late
live forever
dont go

deadnote

so soft so true
fly away
away from here
the sun shines down
the world revolves
ill wait here
wait for you

my heart cries
to be alone
wanting love
to be with you
not much to say
not much more than that
i love you
it says everything