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deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
edited January 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
im lost in the fire
deadening thud
shoot me further
down this hole

i fight myself free
a blinding love
i do not reach
im down in this hole

goodbye
my soul isnt singing
goodbye
my soul isnt singing

in my most loving thoughts
your hovering above
and in the life
i want to touch you

to touch you
set your laughter free

dreamer in my dream

we got the guns

i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    very touching, i like it a lot
    thank you deadnote
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    thanks alot
    its not as good as it hurts though
    maybe someday it will be heaven
    in my heart and soul
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    wow...in a hole, and fire...ouch...rough day. ;)

    nice one...great sentiment indeed.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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