loss

deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
flipping through the pages
a loss is a gain
reaching out
means stepping away
and guilt clutches
at the heart
pulling it downward
typing for stars
far away we are
from earth to mars
and its my feelings that
ultimately pay
its my own fault
that i should fade
stepping out of the plane
and into the net
set your laughter free

dreamer in my dream

we got the guns

i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    a gain is a loss
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • shareshare Posts: 551
    again?
    we're all sentient snowflakes
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    I'm a number that doesn't count
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    the nothing ventured - the nothing feigned
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    again is an adverb


    :D
  • shareshare Posts: 551
    I'm funnin' & punnin'
    we're all sentient snowflakes
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    I'm a number that doesn't count
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    the nothing ventured - the nothing feigned
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    when it comes to her love
    he gets lost in what he thinks is heaven
    for she is above and beyond the sky
    he begs for her
    and he loves to do it
    but he feels as though others are mad at him
    even now
    the words bring fear
    he crosses over the line to reach out
    to touch her with the most godly feel he could ever have
    and prays that it might be good enough for her
    to show her how beautiful she is to him
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    edit

    she is heaven to him
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    These are so full of love. I like them. :)
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